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God aften
Jeg skulle skrive et lidt langt digt der indeholdte temaerne "trist" og "hunde" og da jeg aflevere for sent da jeg har været på ferie kan lærene ikke nå at rette det, det skal nemlig bare hænges op blandt de andre
det er måske et lidt underlidt digt men ja, jeg har kun brugt 35 minutter på det da jeg ellers har været til fest
Jeg går i 7 klasse så der er sikkert fejl i (jeg er ikke sikker men det er det jeg gerne vil være, og selvom jeg er halv englænder laver jeg tit fejl i gramatik og det) og mine forældre er stadig til fest så håber at I gider hjælpe med at rette fejl:

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You found me on a rainy day
I'd finally found a place to stay
I'd never thought that day would come
People've always seen me like I was gone

You gave me food and lots of water
And lots of toys; Shorter and longer
You called me "best friend", I did that too
If only you understood what I said to you

I remember the days by the lovely sea
And all the kind things you did to me
I've been by your side in good times and bad
You were like a friend, but also a dad

The years gone by, I've growed old with you
We've had so many things to do
Sooner or later we'll have to part
But I hope that I'll always be in you heart

Today you've been so sad and blue
I know, I feel the same way too
But if you were me and I were you
You'ld be sure this is the right thing to do

I feel so weak as I say these last word
But just look out the window at the beautiful birds
I'll always be with you whereever you stay
In the grass, in the sky and at the bay

You kiss my head, but just before I sleep away
I look at you and try to say
I know you are my angel so
I'll love you till forever more