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engelsk kig lige :) engelsk kig lige :)

mig og en veninde skulle skrive en sjov stil, så vil i finde rettelser til denne :
The dinos are coming

Dear personnel officer of the dino world.
I am writing this application because I think, it seems like a very interesting job. I like to challenge myself, and try new exiting things.
Now about me: My name is Benedict Von Beck, I am 12 years old, maybe you already now put me in the “NO” box. “Because I am too young to take responsibility for a big center like yours”. BUT I urge you to keep reading:
When I was 2 years old I won a lot of spelling competitions. In a age of 4 I invent the internet. Actually I was even so clever, that I learned my English teacher, Carsten Vestergaard to use a dishcloth instead of his hand, every time the blackboard has been full of words.
When all my friends finished 4. Grade I already finished the college.
I don’t have homework (I made it all so fast, in the class), but sometime HP asks me to correct all the other students Mat or chemistry because I am just as clever as him.
One day I saw a writing competition in a newspaper, where the first prize was a trip to the African dessert with some other archeologists. I think it sound very exciting, so I wrote a very good text, I was extremely happy about it, ant than I send it in.

That trip must be mine! I waited with my telephone all day and all nights, I nearby lost the hope But someday they called and tell me that the first prize was mine.

After 5 warm days in the heat I found some bone from tyrannosaurs rex. It was wery exiting. I think it was the best day in my life.
I hope for a jop like a supervisor or something like that, I think I would be god to take accountability for the whole park. But if you have a job to me where I can invent new cars or machines I will be happy too.
I hope I sound interesting in your ears. I can step in, already now if you want to.





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Kommentarer på:  engelsk kig lige :)
  • #1   2. feb 2009 Det eneste jeg lige kan finde ved hurtig gennemlæsning er: i det afsnit der begynder med: "After 5 warm" og så sætning 2, der er 2 stavefejl, her er som det skal staves "very exciting". I næste afsnit: "I hope for a jop" ja der skulle jo stå "job"


  • #2   2. feb 2009 Og jo det hedder 4th grade

  • #3   2. feb 2009 tusin tak og ja det hedder th. det var bare en hurtig fejl smiley tak

  • #4   2. feb 2009 "I think it sound very exciting" skal hedde I thought it sounded very exciting. Da du skriver det i datid. Den sætning du har skrevet er i nutid

  • #5   2. feb 2009 It godt tips er desuden at hvis ordet starter med e,a o.l. skal der står AN foran f.eks har du skrevet "In a age" der skal det være in an age

  • #7   2. feb 2009 dygtig ung dame ..........kan bare ikke stave på engelsk :-))


    her er lidt flere rettelser

    Dear Sir,
    I am writing this application because I think, it sounds like it is a very interesting job. I like to challenge myself, and try new exciting things.
    About me: My name is Benedict Von Beck, I am 12 years old, maybe you've already put me in the “NO” box “because I am too young to take responsibility of a big center such as yours”. BUT I urge you to keep reading:
    When I was 2 years old I won a lot of spelling competitions. At the age of 4, I invented the internet. Actually I was so clever that I tought my English teacher, Carsten Vestergaard, to use a dishcloth instead of his hand, every time the blackboard was full of words.
    When all my friends finished 4thGgrade I finished college.
    I don’t have homework (I make it all so fast, in class), but sometimes the HP asks me to correct all the other students' math or chemistry papers because I am just as clever as he is.
    One day I saw a writing competition in a newspaper, where the first prize was a trip to the African desert with some archeologists. I thought it sounded very exciting, so I wrote a very good text, I was extremely happy about and sent it.

    This trip had to be mine! I waited by my telephone all day and all night, I almost lost hope, but one day they called and told me that the first prize was mine!

    After 5 warm days in the heat, I found some bone from tyrannosaurs rex. It was very exciting. I think it was the best day of my life.
    I hope for a job as a supervisor or something like that, I think I would be good at taking responsibility for the whole park. But if you have a job for me where I can invent new cars or machines, I will be happy to take that.
    I hope I sound interesting in your ears. I can begin as soon as possible





  • #8   2. feb 2009 tusin tak folkens smiley

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