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Hej! Jeg tænkte på, om der var nogle der var gode til engelsk? Og som ville læse min stil igennem på 360 ord, og evt. vil sige, om der er nogle tydelige fejl, ikke de små, blot de tydelige.

Message in a bottle

Samantha Landon
1210 East Cliff Rd.
Bar Harbor, Maine 04605, USA.
24th August 2008

To the person who finds this bottle. I’m so glad that you have found my message. I don’t know what I should have done, if you did not find it. I’m in that situation that I’m for a few weeks ago, sailed out on my ship. But my ship hit an iceberg, and it sank. I had one lifeboat, and now I’m being stranded on an Island. I’m living of fruits that I’m finding on the Island, there is so many different kinds of new fruits, that I’ll never seen before. There is a source in the woods with clean water, and that’s what I’m drinking right now. I’m also trying to catch fish, but it’s hard, sometimes I get a single fish. I almost forget to introduce myself, my name Is Samantha Landon, and normally I’ve living on East cliff road, number 1210 in Bar Harbor in Maine, with my husband James Landon. We have two kids, Isabella and Noah. The reason why I sailed out was because, I been out at sea to study a new kind of fish, that I found. I’m working alone, I’m a really independent, I think so. Now I think it was a really stupid idea, but it’s a kind of too late. I want you, whoever is reading this right now, to call my husband, he knows where I am, I think so, and hope so. He is the only one, who has been out here with me. The fish I were scrutinize, is living close to this Island, so he should know where I am. You can find him on my address, and if he isn’t home, then you can find him on this website www.write.yellowpages.pt I really hope you’re interest in helping me, so I can get home to my family, and my job. I promise you, that I’ve never forget who you are, you see it’s a kind of lonely out here, and I’ve been here, In many days now, and I really want to go home, to my normal life.


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  • #1   19. sep 2013 Jeg tror ikke du skal skrive island med stort, da det så er landet Island du refererer til..
    That i HAVE/HAD never seen before, (jeg er ikke selv så god til grammatik, men du har skrevet I'll, og det ved jeg er forkert)
    Almost forgOt i stedet for forgEt
    I'm living on, i stedet for i've
    I have been out, i stedet for I been out
    It's kind of too late
    I will never forget, i stedet for I've never forget
    It's kind of lonely
    For many days

    Jeg ved ikke om det er for små fejl jeg har rettet, det var bare dem der lige sprang mig i øjnene (:


  • #2   19. sep 2013 Mange tak!:-)

  • #3   19. sep 2013 To the person who finds this bottle. I’m so glad that you have found my message. I don’t know what I would have done, if you did not find it. I’m a situation that I a few weeks ago, sailed out on my ship, but my ship hit an iceberg, and it sank. I had one lifeboat, and now I’m being stranded on an Island. I’m living of fruits that I find on the Island, there is so many different kinds of new fruits, that I’ll never seen before. There is a source in the woods with clean water, and that’s what I’m drinking right now. I’m also trying to catch fish, but it’s hard, sometimes I only get a single fish. I almost forget to introduce myself, my name Is Samantha Landon, and normally I’ve living on East cliff road, number 1210 in Bar Harbor in Maine, with my husband James Landon. We have two kids, Isabella and Noah. The reason why I sailed out was because, I been out at sea to study a new kind of fish, that I found. I’m working alone, I’m a really independent, I think. Now I think it was a really stupid idea, but it’s a kind of too late. I want you, whoever is reading this right now, to call my husband, he knows where I am, I think so, and hope so. He is the only one, who has been out here with me. The fish I were scrutinize, is living close to this Island, so he should know where I am. You can find him on my address, and if he isn’t home, then you can find him on this website www.write.yellowpages.pt I really hope you’re interested in helping me, so I can get home to my family, and my job. I promise you, that I’ve never forget who you are, you see it’s a kind of lonely out here, and I’ve been here, for many days now, and I really want to go home, to my normal life.

    Sådan lige hurtigt rettet via iphone smiley


  • #4   19. sep 2013 Lige et nysgerrigt spørgsmå. Må man gerne skrive talesprog nu? Vi skulle skrive I will, I am o.s.v.

  • #5   19. sep 2013 Bjergged, jeg må melde pas.. Har boet 7 år i USA og der måtte vi godt skrive talesprog, men aner faktisk ikke hvordan reglerne er herhjemme omkring det.. Men det er yderst sjældent man ser nogle i USA skrive en stil sådan "i am, i will" osv. smiley

  • #7   19. sep 2013 okay, vi måtte bare ikke, derfor jeg lige blev nysgerrig på om det var blevet tilladt nu smiley

  • #8   19. sep 2013 aaaah, se så er det ikke helt lavet om, så føler jeg mig ikke såååååå gammel igen haha, tak Nicolai smiley

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